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[Fwd: FW: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06.txt]

This includes a copy of Gen-ART review comments for TFRC.bis,



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Document: draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06.txt
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: 19 May 2008
IESG Telechat date: 22 May 2008

This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

This is a well-written detailed draft updating an existing
RFC on rate-based congestion control.  It has clearly had a
high level of review by congestion control experts.

I have only done a generalist review, and in particular have
not checked the equations and pseudo-code in detail.  I trust
that the authors and reviewers in the DCCP WG to have done
this level of review, as indicated by the change history.

idnits 2.08.10 found 1 line that was 1 character too long
and pointed out that a -04 version of the rfc2581bis draft
exists.  Neither of these need attention, as the RFC Editor
will handle them in the normal course of editing activity.

David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
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