Re: F16 Release announcement draft

[Ben Cotton <bcotton@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On Tue, Oct 25, 2011 at 7:19 AM, John J. McDonough <wb8rcr@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> I would reword that a little

Good call. I've edited it as you suggested. That sentence was
originally copypasta from the KDE website and somewhere along the
rewording I forgot how to English.


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