[Bug 169895] Writing style/grammar improvements for release notes

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Summary: Writing style/grammar improvements for release notes


https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=169895


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------- Additional Comments From relnotes@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx  2007-02-10 02:45 EST -------
These are good corrections, I'm sorry to say that we probably did not make most
of these changes; it appears this bug wasn't reviewed properly.  For the moment,
I'm going to block the tracker bug so we can review the content here in
comparison to the source.

If you are interested in contributing more directly, the release notes content
is written in the Wiki:

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats

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